Friday, July 17, 2009

A Ribbon of Breathe

Warm summer night,
a breeze on the air,
a ribbon of breathe
like a cold winter stare.

softly the night speaks,
as feet move across concrete,
a ribbon of breathe
like a lone martyr feels.

aching remindings,
of simple conversations,
a ribbon of breathe
like a heart's frozen tears.

Stars still stand still,
as the earth makes her movements
a ribbon of breathe
like a loss in silence here.

4 comments:

Rikkij said...

April- very beautiful building around such a lovely statement. Here, tenuous might be better than heavy and a ribbon surely permits escape. Nice. ~rick

Laura said...

I loved the flow of this one.
very nice...and peaceful.
Love and Light, Laura

Brosreview said...

Ah! Beautiful! This is fantastic! Keep writing!!!

findingmywingsinlife said...

Rikkij,
I thought of the line and liked the way it sounded..the words building around it though were a bit difficult, I found myself wanting to write about some inner things that I wasn't ready to share just yet.

Laura,
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Brosreview,
Wonderful!